托福口语评分标准的三个维度，即科学、语言使用和主题教育

01 Delivery

　　Delivery: How clear your presentation is. Good responses are those in which the speech is fluid and clear, with good pronunciation, natural pacing, and natural-sounding intonation patterns

　　语言表达：考生能做到表达清晰，良好的表达应流畅清晰，发音正确，语速适中，发音和语调自然。

　　02 Language use

　　2. Language Use: How effectively you use gram mar and vocabulary to convey your ideas.Raters will be looking to see how well you can control both basic and more complex language structures and use appropriate vocabulary。

　　语言运用：考生能否有效地运用英语语法和词汇表达自己的观点?评分人会考查考生是否能熟练运用简单和复杂的语言结构以及适当的词汇。

　　03Topic development

　　Topic development：How fully you answer the question and how coherently you present your ideas. Good responses generally use all or most of the time allotted, and the relationship between ideas and the progression from one idea to the next is clear and easy to follow.

托福写作如何收尾

　　在托福写作中，文章末段通常要完成下列任务：

　　1讨论作者自己的看法的重要性

　　2 以不同的措辞复述文章的主题

　　3 总结本文的主要论点

　　4 还可以包含轶事，引语，统计数字或者建议

　　收尾的时候要包括以下几个要素：

　　1. 再次陈述主题。用 paraphrase 方式再次呈现主题陈述中出现的三要素: a.问题中存在争议的地方; b.观点;c.理由。

　　2. 结束句。放在陈述完主题之后。

　　托福写作辅导提出结尾段结束句的三种常见写法：

　　一. 托福作文的最后总结教训或提出建议

　　In conclusion, whether to imitate or vary from others to achieve success, it hinges mostly on the occupations we engage in. For jobs like doctors that require routine practices, it is unnecessary for them to make alterations to become successful. Whereas artists like painters whose works are characteristic of creativity and imagination, it is of crucial importance to distinguish from others to succeed.

　　二. 提出令人忧虑的结果或可能出现的负面结果

　　假设读者没有想作者说的那样去做，在结论中提出将会出现的负面结果，帮助读者预见到令人忧虑的后果，进而令读者自然第接受作者的意见。

　　e.g., To summarize, on one hand, for artists who are fortunate to profit immensely from their occupation, it is unnecessary for the government to offer additional financial incentives for them. On the other hand, government should provide financial support and appropriate policies to impoverished artists who engage in conventional craftsmanship because these are viewed as national treasure and cultural heritage of the country. If the government did not support those unfortunate traditional artists, the valuable conventional forms of arts would disappear very soon.